For my subvertisement, I went with an advertisement from
Apple, for the iPhone 6. In what is in a way similar to Feed, I do not really like how tons of people in today’s world are
so addicted to their phones. The original ad says, “iPhone 6: Because you
deserve nothing less than the best.” Now, I do not have a terrible problem with
their advertisement, as I realize they have to do their best to attract people
to buy their product. However, I do not totally agree that people necessarily deserve
to have an iPhone. I have always believed that you get what you work for. To
address my main issue with the world addiction to iPhone’s, I changed the
wording of the advertisement to, ”More addicting than ever.” Then, on the
screen of the iPhone I put a drawing I found of someone holding a phone, and it
looks as if it is becoming biologically attached to them, almost like what we
see in Feed. All around me, I see
people addicted to their phones. The average person supposedly checks their
phone eighty-five times per day. I think that this addiction to phones is
hurting people’s, especially young people’s, conversation skills. People will
be at a party, and will pull out their phones and zone out from wherever they
are as soon as they get a little bit bored. I am guilty of this myself.
Sometimes I will see people pull out their phones while they are in the middle
of a conversation with someone. People can’t even watch a movie in one sitting
without being distracted by their phones. This is frustrating. People are never
alone now today, and I don’t think that is a totally good thing. I think it is
important that people have time where they are alone with themselves and their
own thoughts.
Brendan- I have noticed the same thing about cell phones and definitely about the loss of in-person communication.
ReplyDeleteI think that was a good way to subvert the ad because it's totally true. Almost all of us are addicted to our phones in some form whether we realize it or not.
ReplyDeleteI agree with this Brenden, Technology is incredibly addicting. I know this because i'm completely addicted to technology.
ReplyDeleteI completely agree! Technology is so addictive and it's so easy to just stay connected and hide behind a computer screen than have actual human contact. It's sad. Your subvertisement looks so good!
ReplyDeleteI really like your subvertisement! It very relatable to just about everyone, youth and adults. Technology is great but so addicting.
ReplyDeleteGood job relating your subvertisement to the book. It is so pertinent to young kids today.
ReplyDeleteThis was definitely a good use of photoshop, I liked the idea of the phone being biologically connecting to a human hand.
ReplyDeleteAwesome job on your subvertisement! I like how you compared your subvertisement to the book. You did a nice job fitting the image on the phone screen. I agree with you I also believe our youth is becoming attached to electronics.
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